Church Confirmation Letter Please Help Me With My Confirmation Letter To The Bishop?

Please help me with my confirmation letter to the Bishop? - church confirmation letter

April 5, 2009
Dear Bishop Braxton
I (my name) as a member of (my church), in the City (I) have been preparing for the sacrament of Confirmation. I am pleased to confirm, because I think I want a full member of the Catholic Church and the gifts of the Holy Spirit. I also think it will strengthen my relationship with God.
Last year I had to prepare for this sacrament in many ways. I regularly attended confirmation classes and meeting with the father had Lawlyer. I received the other sacraments, such as preparing Eurcharist and reconciliation, which I think also helped me. I also went to the DYC, which helped me build a stronger relationship with God, and above all, I prayed.
During the preparations, also chose the Saints, would be confirmed. I chose St. Elizabeth of Hungary, because he looked like a good person and always have been and never take the trouble. I live my life happy and I feel that my receipt is doing to help me.
To my sponsor, I opted for my brother. He was always there for me and I think it is a good model for me in the church. He attends Mass regularly and lives his life like a true Christian.
I feel very honored to be able to confirm that this year. Thank you for an important part of this experience.
Best regards,

(my name)

(my name)








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